Love | Timestamps: Unconditional
Does the formatting stay the same throughout (e.g., October 2012 vs. 10/12/12 )?
If you'd like a review, please paste the draft (or a specific section) here! In the meantime, here is a quick checklist to see if your draft is hitting the right marks for this theme: 1. The "Timestamp" Mechanic Timestamps: Unconditional Love
Since I don't have the text of your draft yet, I can't give you a specific critique. However, the title suggests a structured, chronological exploration of a relationship or a life. Does the formatting stay the same throughout (e
Does the "love" look different in the first timestamp versus the last? It should ideally evolve from infatuation or idealism into something more weathered and resilient. the title suggests a structured
