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: As a web novel with over 16 million words, the pacing is a frequent point of critique. Many reviewers note that the first book feels like a "messy first draft" in need of a heavy-handed editor, with chapters that frequently "wander" and "dawdle" through slice-of-life moments. the wandering
Reader opinions on the first volume are notably polarized, often centering on whether the slow start is a dealbreaker. the wandering
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