His lungs burned. Every breath felt like inhaling fire because his body was processing oxygen faster than the air could settle. His vision began to blur at the edges, a sign that his "speed-well" was running dry.
Should we focus on the of his powers on his health?
The world exploded into sound. The roar of the freighter, the scream of metal, and the deafening crash of the ship hitting the outskirts of the plaza filled the air. The giant titanium shard plummeted, but instead of slicing through the oxygen scrubber, it hit Kaelen’s cable web. The lines groaned, sparked, and held. The shard swung harmlessly away, slamming into an empty parking structure.
Should this be the start of a or a standalone mystery?