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"It’s just... empty," Maya said, her eyes welling. "I worked so hard, and it’s just scrap now. It’s a complete let down."

"A let down," he said, turning back, "is just the world reminding you that you’re still trying to create something real, rather than just something functional. It hurts, I know. It feels like wasted time." let down

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