: When drafting , just get the ideas down. You can fix the "bugs" in the plot during the revision stage.
If you're building out this "Dunli" universe, here are some strategies to keep the momentum going:
Elias paused the frame. In the reflection of a copper pillar, he saw the cameraman. It was himself—ten years older, scarred, and wearing a uniform he didn't recognize. The timestamp on the file read April 29, 2036 .
: Every good "Part 3" needs a transformative incident to force the character into action.
: Focus the narrative through one character's eyes at a time. This guide from Reedsy explains how to use "he/she" while staying deep inside a character's thoughts.
"Dunli isn't a person," Elias whispered to the empty room. "It’s a coordinate."
The narrator’s voice—distorted and metallic—broke the silence of the recording. "If you are watching this, the anchor has held. Dunli is stable, but the bridge is closing. We’ve found the source of the signal, but it’s not a machine. It’s a memory."