"I’m saying I’m tired of the games. I’m tired of pretending that I don't look for you in every room I walk into." He reached out, taking her hand. "No more half-truths. No more 'just friends' when we both know it’s more. I love you. And from here on out, I’m done keeping that a secret."

Maya leaned against the doorframe, her expression softening. "What are you saying?"

For months, he’d played it safe. He was the king of the "casual check-in," the master of the "maybe next week." He’d built a fortress of cool composure to protect himself from the sting of rejection. But tonight, that fortress felt like a cage.

How do you feel about the of the ending—should we add more dialogue or keep it focused on the emotional release ?